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Softly Creased Memories
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Softly Creased Memories |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Softly Creased Memories ~*Marge Tindal*~ I loved you so dearly Way-back-when and then again as yesterday came to lay in softly creased memories across my heart I felt the all of us again~ Knowing that somewhere, tonight, you are remembering too I can only hope you are smiling through some happy tears as I am at thoughts of you~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (11-07-2003 09:09 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you Marge... The bewitching of the moon brings out such wonderful poetry...Don'tcha think  TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautful indeed Marge. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this reminds me of the many tears, both glad and gloomed, that I've shed as I've gone through picture albums... Very beautiful Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...Hugs!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I can see the folding of love in this. Stunning! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, this one is so tender....touches the reader as well as the receiver of the gift. Very nicely done. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge my sis of heart...you are so special! I was replying to "Awesome" and it ended up here...so that's okay...you are!  [This message has been edited by Martie (11-07-2003 10:57 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you my friends~ This one has a tender significance to me ... from my heart to the hearts of many~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a gently written and deeply felt sentiment. One might write such to an old and lost but not forgotten love. What a pleasure it would be to be so thought of. Great job. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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midgetday3 Junior Member
since 2003-11-06
Posts 11Kentucky |
This is very beautiful. I can definitely relate to it! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
as my friend bon bon would say..."Oh the tingle to true love" may leave you in the physical, but forever remains in your heart" Lovely write Marge, thank you for sharing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 oh my...this put me in a mood now...(well, I was in it already but this helped) |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
Just what my heart need-it!!! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Such a heart-felt write and very tenderly expressed! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the gentle title.....Love the connecting thoughts from days gone by.....Good work! Eric |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
the last verse is beautiful |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hugs Marge! I hope you are alright. This sounds very sad. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I could feel the love and warmth in this Marge, so very beautiful. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet..... A beautiful thought beautifully expressed, picture lady...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Varuch Elohim Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 41Italy |
Very nice work...just beautiful. Varuch Elohim |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just lovely, my friend. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanking you all for your kind acceptance of this piece~ It fell softly from my heart ... reaching out ... touching others~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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