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silenttruth
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0 posted 2003-11-07 10:02 PM



                      who I am  
   who iam is not who I should be who I should be is not who I am what am I meant to be I dont know why I am who I am I dont know why I am somebody I dont know but why are we all on earth and not venus I dont know why do we breath why is there evil I dont know all I know is that it is the way it is I am the way I am  

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ParisGrl
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1 posted 2003-11-07 11:03 PM


Silent,

Great write!  I enjoyed it.  

Laura

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2 posted 2003-11-08 01:04 AM




(sigh) And you are not just that you are so much more for you are special and special people have so much and that is who you are someone with so much beauty inside! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most emotive write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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