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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2003-11-06 11:05 PM

See My Island

Rolling thunder through rose bushes
Morning torment swollen eyes
Day has risen life has spoken
Embrace me in your heart
For within me reigns much pain
I am but a human torn apart

The hills I tread grasses so high
Hiding my tears camouflage my sigh
The sounds of winds whistling comfort
Chilled, crouched sleep my last resort
For in my soul lives a tomorrow
I stand again amidst my sorrow

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-11-06 11:16 PM

"For in my soul lives a tomorrow
I stand again amidst my sorrow"

I see your island...soulful write. ~K~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-11-06 11:17 PM

JD~
I see such hope in this closing couplet -

'For in my soul lives a tomorrow
I stand again amidst my sorrow'

I, too, shall look to tomorrow~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-07 02:22 AM

that's sad

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-11-07 06:16 PM

this is a very sad write...

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2003-11-08 01:19 AM

The hills I tread grasses so high
Hiding my tears camouflage my sigh
The sounds of winds whistling comfort

When all else fails, it seems like a good old walk with Mother Nature is a good idea.
A meaningful write.
sadelite

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-11-08 01:24 AM

(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad but sounds optimistic at the end, sweet friend, know that you most certainly will find a beacon of light toward the end and rest will come to your heart, yay, so take that island and make a peninsula out of it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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