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Open Poetry #29

Emeraldo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-09 11:54 PM

Emeraldo

Her long black silky hair
just hanging there,
falling all over
my body.

She's real good, (bravado)
it's understood,
she's Emeraldo.

Emeralds from Brazil
go all over the world
and so does she.

And so we met.
And so we kissed...
passionately.

Emeraldo likes to be on top
and that's all right with me.

JamesLee
November08
2003

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-11-10 12:15 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you truly would make a wonderful romantic novelist as you continue to explore the horizons of the world and values of love! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-11-10 04:17 AM

This is vivid, and beautifully so.. Thank you,

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

3 posted 2003-11-10 09:54 AM

That's very romantic and passionate...just like you :-)

Good job

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-11-10 10:42 AM

beautiful

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