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The Fall |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ The Fall Colored leaves Hang from upon the trees Then one by one they start to fall Below 11-7-03 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSue~ Good to see you gal~ Lovely and timely is this write~ Today I watched the leaves dance across the yard~ Hope all is well hon~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
short and so serene.  There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Loving nature.. I'm always charmed by these about the seasons, and the outdoors...Lovely this was as yours always are!!! Very nice! Love, Terri~  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Glory girl, What a wonderful little leaf falling off the tongue. Nice write. Very nice. TD |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
great! short and sweet! keep up the good work (personally i hate rakin the leaves in fall) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Sue! This is lovely...well done! Good to read ya gal! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I liked your simplicity and the visual formate of your tree of words. Sadie |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sorry, Smart Chick--I got a little careless in my spelling. A smart chick like you would know format does not have an "e!" Sadelite |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this brought a huge smile to my face, yay, may autumn bring you beautiful and fruitful harvests, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sue  I'm glad to see you here. I like your poem, roo. Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful imagery Sue |
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