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Moon Slivers |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A sailor’s light, this swollen moon, once lain upon the sea. In wait of but a gentle push away from gravity. To wrest the peak of shining light, an orb of Luna’s birth, round as the eye in gleaming bright, away from mother earth. The solar quest does find the dark, as wedding bells do ring. For now the twain have said their vows, as angels above sing. A shadow plucks away the light, now hid by clouds of white. And on this date our rain born fate, no moon this moonless night. [This message has been edited by Magnus (11-07-2003 07:34 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
moon or moonless the sky kisses the sea nice write, sailor  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Drawn into you by the pull of the poetic moon ...~ This is a beautiful read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
New style looks good on you Mag. Yes, the moon kisses the sea. TD |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ah beautiful... I still wish we had some sort of a voice thing on here, so if people wanted they could record themselves reading their poem, and people could have the option to listen as they read. It'd just be nice to hear.... Love it. Always, Alyssa |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I enjoyed watching the moon tonight after seeing my sisters high school play, it was marvelous seeing both events! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...how I always enjoy your imaginations and creations |
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