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mytuesdaywishes
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a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-11-07 05:05 PM


tiny bones keep us sound
carry us on the ground
tiny doors give us light
deliver us in shades of white
tiny words become us here
allowing us to be sincere
tiny needs rob us blind
remind us of the clock we wind
tiny you and tiny me
the wonder of relativity

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

© Copyright 2003 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
wandering glider
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aloft
1 posted 2003-11-07 05:10 PM


"tiny needs rob us blind
remind us of the clock we wind
"

Sure sounds like my life lately.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-11-07 05:20 PM


Rachael~
Being a tiny collector ... this certainly caught my eye~
I like it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

Sadelite
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3 posted 2003-11-08 01:49 AM


"The wonder of relativity."  Oh, yeah!  Isn't it interesting how things change in appearance from where you stand?   Everything is relative isn't it!  I enjoyed this.
                          Sadelite

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4 posted 2003-11-08 03:16 AM


wonderful perspective!
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5 posted 2003-11-08 03:28 AM




(smiles) Oh Rachael, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your poetry is alwways an exhibit as your heart is a museum, which we always love observing, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rachael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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