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A Giving Back of Simple Words -- for Temptress
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A Giving Back of Simple Words -- for Temptress |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I have been removed from this place too long, the place that I could always go to in your voice, moonlit and soft taking me closer into your very being where I always felt at home since the first hello, it has always been passion passion, yes, but so much more my heart has always been yours just as yours has always been mine even if our bodies weren’t together I too, wish that things were different that the distance did not mock us so that my words to you could just be here on this page without fear so that we would always know and remember our promises to one another, and, to ourselves it has been a while since my words have spoken, a while since they have told my heart and, I know that they are not enough sometimes, but, they are all that I have now I hope that they are enough to let you know of my heart enough to keep you safe during the clouded days and keep you warm during the starless nights when the tears come and when only a touch will do I still see you I still see that shy woman who is more than just her words you become those words and you still make my heart beat faster with everything you do I love you too there is nothing more to say we have spoken our hearts so, let the critics speak and the naysayers scoff we have touched, we have loved, we do love and, in the end, that is all that matters -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"we have touched, we have loved, we do love and, in the end, that is all that matters" Yes Sven..love is all that matters. You have written your heart so lovingly here. I have also missed your words..always enjoyed your style of writing. I do hope you have come home to stay. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You Both, sweet friend, and no critic or cynic could ever win because your love is pure and true and I don't think you could say it any better as honest proclamation is the most golden form of communication! (wipes tears) I am so happy you're back and I know Jennifer is going to tear up in joy reading this, God Bless You, you are a man of golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Standing and clapping.....YES....always follow your heart, and disregard the words that people do not understand....:0) hugsss you....have so missed this about you! WELCOME Home~ Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven Good to read you again, well done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Such a beautiful read ... I 'almost' didn't want to read it until TemptyOne had~ Just lovely ... and I know she will agree ... and more~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good to see you, Sven....your heart speaks so eloquently. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, I enjoyed this read very much. Great to see your writing again. :-) Take Care, Laura |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hey there Sven! Glad to see you back. Love is all that matters. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Do you know how wonderful you are...and how wonderful you can be if you go beyond all the obstacles? I am sure you don't, but I've a feeling you will find out. I believe in you. I always find your heart in your words, Sven. Thank you for you, Sweet Man. Thank you for this answer poem. I don't care what those who don't know the whole story think anymore.  I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write Sven. You've been missed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice words from your heart...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful *sigh*, so glad that I stepped in passions today, so I could read your loving words here. Charisma |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Everyone says you've been missed, but I've only been here since July so I've never seen you before, but I can see why they have missed you...this was beautiful, honest, and heartfelt. Lovely this was to read!  Love, Terri~  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love you too there is nothing more to say we have spoken our hearts so, let the critics speak and the naysayers scoff we have touched, we have loved, we do love and, in the end, that is all that matters Yes, my dear sweet Temptress and Sven...."that is all that matters" Oh, this touches my heart. My Gary has told me this exact same thing so many times, because there are so many of my so-called friends and family who do not agree with our love...simply because they don't understand. But, what does it matter, anyway? NOTHING!! Real Love is too scarce in this world, so I cheer on and encourage whoever finds it!! Thanks for sharing this with us. Oh, LOVE IS IN THE AIR AT PASSIONS Hugs to you both  Ethel & Gary [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-09-2003 04:32 PM).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Edited Sorry, but these forums are not a venue for airing personal grievances. Some issues should remain private, or be discussed with a lawyer, not used to put others on public trial. We aren't here to judge anything except the value of good poetry. [This message has been edited by Ron (11-11-2003 03:55 PM).] |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
As your friend, I find this heartfelt and endearing write very romantic. A fantasy is only "pretend" and the love you two share is NOT a cyberland fantasy. Hang in there and never allow anyone to stop you from expressing yourself with your words. Hugs to you and please keep sharing your work with all of us! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all. . . your words mean more to me than I can say. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Heartfelt ARCTIC WIND |
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