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preference (duet between my sister and i)
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preference (duet between my sister and i) |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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simple like a sheer lie not minds inspired by the godly bliss to uncover future not even fortune gifted but miserable wretches doomed to follow humbly clearly seeing our sentence we choose to differ. our sadness for memories- we leave energy on places. feeling of something undone, bleaching, lost-you painfully need it… now harmless the running abnormalities sullied by scattered others… the abundance of frightened misunderstandings existing in existence… the blinds are fallen upon the windowpane, frame squeezed to a wall of solid hole to hide is to belong… if we should be put in society why do we need to sleep? visions are like desperately needed clues- soak hand into the bleeding throat feel the cooper behind the spine… the smell of cold silk pleasing the eyes the fiber non-reality… off-subsistence between the arctic chill… cold cannot freeze warm can which do you find more optimistic? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hate the thought that you feel this way but goddamn it I love dark..bump |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Jeepers, the talent and the mood runs in families! Well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gotta love the sadness in it all incredible writing, you two |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the abundance of frightened misunderstandings existing in existence… You write so well together! *S* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
"hit me, please" no hit the people not responding? Gladly..tapping louisville bat |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx Raph,u make me laugh (which i don't do too often) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's always nice to welcome your sister to Passions. Thank you for this wonderful duet. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A fabulous write...well done both of you.  fate is not just |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Yes wonderful I look forward to more..... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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