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harpooning a shamen's magic
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harpooning a shamen's magic |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Pure sandal wood ointment and sweetmeats Whisper agreeable lexis through our cup of morning Drinking freely, betel leaves still in infancy Planting beds of arbors and green veggies Clusters of jasmine and china rose engage in a wish Avoiding the company of beggars Misconduct and abusive language In everyday dress, we converse in close textured cloths Building vessels of fruit and Indian wormwood My disposition serves you, listening to the call of adventure Falling into a motion of passion, acquainted abodes of legends Transcending a realm of embodiment and noble qualities Approaching highly probable attachments of mind Where our world faints, moving closer to intensity In the same way affection follows man With expression of thoughts, fondling conviction Arranging things of worth, magnified rite of passage & prediction Unchaste, voluptuous threads, season our supernatural swells Laying precious stones within our secret course With a metaphorical sense, discovering self is our unique contribution Time giving promises, reciting the arts of June With exotic resourcefulness, tracing a goddess-like woman Our musical glasses filled, with forces of good will birthing children Spreading flowers, garlands and wreaths Adorning this magical pool of sorcery What culinary art arrays these jewels from such spiritual extracts Perfuming the mouth, assembling rewards, imaging magic Reaching the center of the earth, to the land that time forgot Love crafts embrace nature, exploring powerful hallmarks Where we reach a spiritual path to greatness Hearing prevailing tones of horses on paper As a legend from the Mists of Avalon Cleaves this might of sword from Zion Savage, barbaric and brutally ambitions Where tenacity claims heroic victories We become the children of swashbuckling Neptune Underneath the Dragon’s Moon |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LeeJ I stand and applaud this "Whitman" like poem. I charged through the courses of each line,Which are lyrically fashioned, thank you for the concert. * I feel aroused when reading this, am I reading something erotic into it that does not exist? * If so, would you have Dr.Frued's number? I need to make an appointment. * Thanks for sharing.....ice/ford |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehhhee...however you read it...may it give you warmth and many smiles.... Yes, a very erotic and spiritual journey indeed, but perhaps not as you may think... Thank you kindly for the comment and warm smiles first thing this a.m. and a good good morning to ya  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, You have melted the ice to water, the water to steam, the steam to mist and the mist to air. What more is there?  |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
this is so well done |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beutiful journey, magical and mystical that you took me on, must be read a few times, so much in this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, such spiritual depth fills these channeling words with confluence and praise to the spirit, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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