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Keth Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 14 |
wanderer of seasons yours is the changing weather never uncovering your thought traveller of seconds time and the meaning will follow slightly unfolding your wish voyager of pathways yours is the finding and seeking finally revealing your truth. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Matthias~ There are lots of thoughts conveyed in this~ Enjoyed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the 'wanderer of seasons' and 'voyager of pathways'-evocative language. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is really cool! |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Those who can tell peoples thoughts like that or maybe better if they can solve anothers mysteri inside i feel you know people just by the look, you can nearby predict their thoughts smile. im sure you did with this one. Smile Jes |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
this one is cool  |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
this one is cool |
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darkatnoon Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 11 |
glad you joined  ! |
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darkatnoon Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 11 |
truth is never constant |
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