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Keth
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0 posted 2003-11-13 09:05 AM



wanderer of seasons
yours is the changing weather
never uncovering
your thought


traveller of seconds
time and the meaning will follow
slightly unfolding
your wish


voyager of pathways
yours is the finding and seeking
finally revealing
your truth.

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-11-13 09:29 AM


Keth,
Good thoughts, good write, good read.


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-11-13 10:24 AM


Matthias~
There are lots of thoughts conveyed in this~
Enjoyed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2003-11-13 12:04 PM


I like the 'wanderer of seasons' and 'voyager of pathways'-evocative language.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-11-13 12:48 PM


this is really cool!
Jes
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Denmark
5 posted 2003-11-13 01:37 PM


Those who can tell peoples thoughts like that or maybe better if they can solve anothers mysteri inside i feel you know people just by the look, you can nearby predict their thoughts smile.

im sure you did with this one.

Smile

Jes


pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
6 posted 2003-11-13 01:45 PM


this one is cool
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
7 posted 2003-11-13 01:46 PM


this one is cool
darkatnoon
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8 posted 2003-11-13 01:49 PM


glad you joined !

darkatnoon
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9 posted 2003-11-13 01:49 PM


truth is never constant
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