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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-25 01:08 AM

would you recognize
these lines etched upon my face
lines that you helped make?

g'nite all..yawn

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-25-2003 01:10 AM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-25 01:13 AM

See what I mean?

Geez, Raph..you rock my socks.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-09-25 01:15 AM

thanks meglet..g'nite try getting some of that stuff..um..er..sleep that's it..sleep...sleeeeeeeep

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-25 01:40 AM

sometimes I think not

blind as they are

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-09-25 07:42 AM

Raph, no defintely not
it is others who see those lines
and try to smooth them out for you '
as best as they can . . .
I loved this
bittersweet . . .
just as they should be
(sleep? ohh that . . .)
*smile*
xxoo

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-09-25 04:40 PM

idiots.

moisturise the fine lines dry hearts and minds cause...listen to the beatles Aaaaannnaa....just one more thing giiiirl.

do you moisturise? you should. heyyyy stayyyy young and invincibleeeee

never seen this emotion written in that context before, very nicely done.

am i having a breakdown?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2003-09-25 04:44 PM

Yes...yup, I would. Great write. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-25 05:01 PM

This is a good write, Raph. It makes the reader think....all your writes make the reader think...but that is a good thing, you know!! LOL

Hugs

Ethel

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2003-09-25 05:05 PM

I think I'd recognize the lines...whether or not I'd recognize the person behind them is debatable. Loved this!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-09-25 05:10 PM

Of course I would...
Loved the write.
~Hugs~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2003-09-25 06:14 PM

Or was it you Raph
to give someone the power
to carve signs of hurt?

Or do you speak of
lines of happiness engraved
by Love's sweet touch?

Only these last ones will last in time and will be recognized forever.

Love your thoughts, made me think too.
Abbracci.
Margherita

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

11 posted 2003-09-26 04:51 PM

Amzing as always

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

12 posted 2003-09-26 05:26 PM

Awesome Raph....

Jason

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

13 posted 2003-09-26 09:19 PM

How else can we all keep track of life little episodes?

Thanks for sharing this.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2003-09-26 09:45 PM

Dixie, me too

Still waiting Sue thanks

Having a breakdown..had..had hugs gemma

Thanks Chris

I'd like to think so Ethel grins

Thank you kindly Kethry

Thanks as always Nancy

Margherita it wasn't my choice to give them that power..abbracci

Thanks as always Brad

Thanks Jason appreciate it

Icebox, nice roadmap no?

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