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Midnight Clarity |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Someday long after the covers have shut out the cold and the curtains have shut out the world, she'll turn to you in a sleepy daze, forgetting that her heart isn't comfortable on her sleeve. Half asleep, she's twice as honest. Half asleep, she's wide awake. She'll wrap her arms around you, too tired to care if she's keeping you up. She'll say you weren't what she expected, just a thousand times more wonderful. She'll whisper in your ear everything that she's too scared to say out loud. She'll paint you a picture of the lifetime she'd gladly spend in your arms. She'll drift off only after making sure the last thing you hear is "I love you..." And you'll know that nothing about this is ordinary. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very, well expressed write,, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
she'll turn to you in a sleepy daze, forgetting that her heart isn't comfortable on her sleeve. Half asleep, she's twice as honest. Half asleep, she's wide awake. She'll wrap her arms around you, too tired to care if she's keeping you up. She'll say you weren't what she expected, just a thousand times more wonderful. Kandi, You made my heart skip and beat...fast and faster. I really loved this! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Half asleep, she's twice as honest. Half asleep, she's wide awake." Wow, this is awesome |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
tender and telling of the things hidden inside, the ones that don't always come out..but maybe should.. well done.. I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kandi A good write, is a good write. |
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Jack- In- The- Green Junior Member
since 2003-09-11
Posts 31The green woodlands. |
Very nicely written and thought provoking. Thank you. jack. Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~BUMP~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kristin, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this made my heart smile as this shines with pure heart and romance! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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