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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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leaf rattle symphony the wind is restless loosing memories from bone you.. linger still smoldering in an unnamed sense novembers devour |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) It would either be one of two things, the memories are dead leaves upon the dirty ground or some flower that blooms later among all others! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
leaf rattle symphony the wind is restless loosing memories from bone you.. linger still smoldering in an unnamed sense novembers devour'''' This is awesome, brings so many emotions to mind and heart..... lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
great depth as usual, and these double and triple meanings are awesome  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
leaf rattle symphony yes, ditto to pardonov just my kind of poetry, this is |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
They do... some more than others. *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
leaf rattle symphony YES! Excellent Bello  Maree fate is not just |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you.. linger still smoldering in an unnamed sense" now you have to stop doing this you made my eyes sting and well up much too fast.....touching Raph....very touching.... |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
but sometimes it's bittersweet, to be devoured and then find that it was the best you've ever had i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Love the forces of the seasons . . . all kinds. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raphael~ This is creatively unique ... love that~ Now, where is your smiling face ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Karilea Thanks Noah dead leaves on the dirty ground..you got the white stripes in my head now Thanks Brad Thanks as always Lauren Thanks Petre appreciate that Thanks Mish ironically I wasn't sure the line fit..i l@ved the idea but was never comfortable with rattle and the thesaurus failed me grins Thanks suthern, just a month full of memories..argh Grazie bella you always make me smile Susan that's why i took down the picture it has that affect..oh you mean my words..oh grins mytuesday yes but that ulitmately devours again knowing its long gone.. Thanks Wandering agreed (vivaldi Seasons great proof) Thanks Marge..hmm good question me thinks I'll avoid it grins |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
what you said in Meg's poem. and like I said. October is so much darker...therefore better. What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
October's cool dark..novembers rip your soul into confetti and throw it around there's a party and i'm not invited kinda dark..and if you can understand just what the hell i just said you let me know cause i don't. i like shiny things..yes. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
"nurse! you forgot to give him his meds!" now that I think of it she forgot mine too. and yes November reminds me of a lot of stuff....that I'd like to forget  don't worry...I understood you...ooo...shiney buttons.. What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph? I left a thread elsewhere to this and scary, I know what you mean kinda like not being invited to your own party . . scaring myself over here now put the shiny thing down please, thank you *smile* xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's all about loss, yes |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Raph...this is incredible writing. Your words touched me. I wonder how you captured my thoughts and penned them so wonderfully. Patricia |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Well, at least I don't feel alone now, in Novembers devour. Soulful write...~K~ |
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