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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Eclipse Tonight I glide under a moon rising in a yellow November haze In this still, chill lonely air I do not share the rabbits’ sense of play But in tomorrow’s night paths will cross with a fullness on display And as it passes through a warm red shadow I will think distantly of you ©110703 |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent, I just hope it's a clear night and i can catch it again. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this alot. Look forward to reading some more. :-) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...I hope I get to see it also. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Lovely. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, and may the eclipse always bring in new cycles of promises for you, one of a whole new love to be cherished forever! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I enjoyed conjuring up the images in my mind. Last December, I think, I counted over 500 incredible shooting stars in about a two hour period. Are you a sky watcher--did you experience that shower? If so, perhaps you'd describe it sometime. Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 love this! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I loved your imagery... I was a day early posting my eclipse poem.... got the date wrong. Well written! Sherry   [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (11-08-2003 03:22 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I missed it... Thanks for bringing it back for me...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I enjoyed this very much. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"Eclipse: I will think distantly of you." I like the dreaminess, and how you connected the images...~K~ |
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