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escape the sun |
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colifer Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 37Ohio |
i sat at the mountain for two days waiting for the sun to set but the sun stared at me, waiting, hoping i'd soon forget. a tousand years rolled by a thousand years at 3 if the sun refuses to set it might as well be me. so i tip my head to apollo and run as far as night a thousand years of sun the night just feels right and i smile up to luna it's face hidden by trees look down at my watch a quarter after three... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
 Wonderful! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a good poem. Makes you think.  Hugs  Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So nice...I would love to sit in the mountains from sun til moon...lovely to read!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Damn... |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Awesome! I like the use of time in this...a thousand years...great job! |
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