Open Poetry #29 |
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I Wish For You |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana ![]() |
I wish you all happiness That can be found in living Even if your smiles of soul Do not come from my giving. Reach out and hold each moment That brings hope of ecstacy - Never fear remonstrances Or protests uttered by me. If I were your everything With gladness, I'd be replete But my love is yours regardless Of whom it is you need. You are in my every thought You sweeten my dreams at night I can't sleep curled in your arms But you provide my life's light And warm me by your being. I can't indulge in selfish What is best for you will be Heartfelt prayer and sincere wish. The purpose of this missive, then And not some mere envoy Is to say I wish for you But much more... I wish you joy. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But more than this...I wish you love... ~*~ Reminds me of an old song, suthern. Beautiful, and lovely... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Such beautiful and loving sentiments here. Lovely penning, Ruth. ![]() When the power of love overcomes the |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A pure, generous, selfless declaration of love and devotion. You are a beautiful member of the human race! ![]() Love & Light, Linda |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Unselfish and unconditional love - There's nothing more pure... This is lovely, suthern - I enjoyed it thoroughly... ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Suthern, no man could ask more of any woman than you have expressed. This is a very lovely and touching write. Very well done and so true in meaning and thought. Thank You. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very loving write,,, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry because of knowing how loving and special you are and how you speak of unselfish, true, and honest love in all its beauty! (big hugggsssssss) You bring the hope of pure love to many, sweet friend, may happiness forever sing in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Suthern...Your love is a treasure, and this poem is the map. Beautiful! ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: We must be close in age... now I'LL be singing it! LOL Thank you very much! vlraynes: Thank you so very much... I'm glad you like! *S* EA: I think you've lost your objectivity, my friend... and I love you for doing so... Thank you for seeing me through kind eyes. *S* Nan: I don't know any other way... *S* Thank you! *S* And thank you so much for the transfer... I truly appreciate it! *S* Magnus: I hope he sees it that way... forced rhyme and all! *S* Thank YOU, kind sir... so very much. *S* QjQ: Thank you! *S* M'toe: What a beautiful card... and even lovelier response... I thank you for both! *S* Martie: I don't have much fair market value, though... darn it! LOL Thank you very much! *S* |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ Your thoughts are pure gold~ This is so very lovely, as you are~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
But you provide my life's light And warm me by your being. I can't indulge in selfish What is best for you will be. I loved those lines most of all. But sadly, it reminds me that even my best wasn't good enough. Love your writing and all that it inspires. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful wishes.. Susan |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Methinks our Laura gives much more than she takes.....time for you to be grabbin' a little, eh? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! may you wishes be sent back ten fold ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I were your everything With gladness, I'd be replete But my love is yours regardless Of whom it is you need. You are in my every thought You sweeten my dreams at night I can't sleep curled in your arms But you provide my life's light And warm me by your being. I can't indulge in selfish What is best for you will be ============================ yep...once our hearts have found that "one & only one", we just want them as happy and content as loving them makes us. You know Im moth smiling at you for this one..and.... you know that I know you know. ![]() your heartlight shines bright in this lovely gift of rhyme Ruthie-girl ![]() "If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This wish is beautiful as is the beat of your heart. ![]() Crystal |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
But my love is yours regardless Of whom it is you need. You are in my every thought You sweeten my dreams at night Heartfelt beauty in this |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Marge: You are a deal... I thank you so much! *S* Blues: When that's the case, he's not the one... however much that hurts. For the right one sees you better than you are... never less. Thank you, lady... so very much. Susan: Thank you! *S* Ratleader: Hmmmm... But what I wanna grab isn't within reach??? LOL Thank you, my friend... you just gave a smile... and I'll grab that gladly. *S* PS: I like that multiplying effect... thank you so much! *S* JM: Yes'm... whatever the cost. *S* Thank you very much! *S* angelblueyes: It's just as important to me. *S* Thank you so much! *S* LeeJ: I thank you so much for thinking so! *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, very nicely done! How many of us can truly wish happiness to someone we love, when it's with someone else? Great phrasing. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
sweet...sweet write gal...well done..just now saw this?.... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ah, true love, me thinks. Enjoyed the warmth of it. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is beautifl.... and this is real love... not selfish at all... wanting what is best for or what the other one wants for them self.... freedom to choose... not a ball and chain... beautiful |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Pilgrimage: I couldn't do otherwise... but it ain't easy bein' me. LOL Thank you very much! *S* Toerag: I'm so glad you did see... and like. *S* Thank you very much! *S* Krawdad: That it is. *S* Thank you so much! *S* Zinsser: I'm enough of a pain without adding shackles! LOL Thank you very much... your kind comments are greatly appreciated. *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this shows how very lucky someone is that is fortunate enough to have your "love" and its dang good writing to boot ![]() love you lady |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ruthie-girl, Your maturity does not surprise me, lovely ![]() |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
~sigh~ someday my dear, someday... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I wish you all happiness That can be found in living Even if your smiles of soul Do not come from my giving. Reach out and hold each moment That brings hope of ecstacy - Never fear remonstrances Or protests uttered by me. If I were your everything With gladness, I'd be replete But my love is yours regardless Of whom it is you need. You are in my every thought You sweeten my dreams at night I can't sleep curled in your arms But you provide my life's light And warm me by your being. I can't indulge in selfish What is best for you will be Heartfelt prayer and sincere wish. The purpose of this missive, then And not some mere envoy Is to say I wish for you But much more... I wish you joy. Sweet Suthern-lady, I was going to quote my favorite part, but couldn't find a favorite.....since they all are!! LOL By the way, I know that I've already read this, I just couldn't find my reply here. LOL Ruth, to me, this is exactly what truly loving another with unconditional love is all about. When we love someone more than we love ouselves and truly want for them what they want, instead of what we want, then we can say we have truly loved. Whoever this is meant for (smiles) should be very proud and honored to have this enormous amount of love bestowed upon them. Thank you so much, sweet Ruth, for sharing your heart with us, and for being YOU. With love and hugs ![]() Ethel > [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-24-2003 03:18 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So very true. If you truly love someone it's THEIR happiness that matters, because in the end if they aren't happy then neither will you be. If they aren't happy it affects your thoughts, and your life in all areas. It's too bad some expect that from you, but can't give that in return. Reciprocal IS loving, too. Love is a reciprocating thing. You can also kill love, too. Thanks for sharing this one. Very much the lovely side of the heart. ![]() ![]() God Bless, SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-24-2003 11:00 AM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is lovely Suthern! Core |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wish for you what you wish ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
jellybeans: Lucky or not, he's got it! LOL Thank you so much... love you, too! *S* Seymour: I think you know me well, my friend. *S* Thank you so much! Edder: I hope so. *S* Thank you! garysgirl: The honor is mine, dear lady... it's a privilege to know him. *S* Thank you so much... your response is dear to me. *S* SharaRose: Thank you for such a thoughtful reply... I appreciate it! *S* Corinne: Thank you very much! *S* Mysteria: Thank you, my friend... I could not ask for more. *S* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
suthern, your works are always gems but this time you have surpassed yourself in this loving missive. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very lovely write, an unconditional love which is heartfelt. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Kethry: I thank you so much, my friend. *S* Gemini: It fills this heart. *S* Thank you! vandana: I'm glad... thank you! *S* |
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