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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-07 10:20 AM



Brown


in the box it was a new color
I choose to paint myself with
a marbling to brush my mind
a sweet dream of brown
stain that sticks under your nails
from one spoonful of earth
to capture and surround a seed
daringly I planted by moon light
and wait impatiently for feathered roots
awakening an out of season turn of events
to see what it will bring


"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-11-07 11:26 AM


awesome, and no matter what happens, I'm wishing you the best....
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2 posted 2003-11-07 12:35 PM


good imagery
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-07 12:39 PM


makes me think of fudge royale ice cream

*shruggs*

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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-11-07 01:39 PM



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5 posted 2003-11-07 01:46 PM


Perhaps the lunar eclipse will be a favorable omen, the red light reflecting through the shadow.

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6 posted 2003-11-07 01:52 PM


sighs
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7 posted 2003-11-07 01:54 PM




(smiles) Maube the North Star in December or the Christmas lights will bask warmth to the soil and bring about a blessing for you, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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8 posted 2003-11-09 09:11 PM


A deep one....this I like.

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