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The Course Of My Imaginings
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The Course Of My Imaginings |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
If you'd allow me I would set a course that goes meandering, whose only purpose is to let we two begin imagining. In circles we'd approach the point where nothing more would block our view. Two dreamers who could share their thoughts, if such a thing wouldn't frighten you. Should we begin to make this bond, would I then feel you pull away ? As words are not a magic wand they have no powers to make you stay. Yet, if you'll walk with me awhile along this path beneath the blu- est skies that I have ever seen then, "magic", might occur to you. I visit here, most times alone, companionship's a pleasant change. Together we can watch the sun- light fade, and more than passing strange, it's almost if I've known you for a long , long time, see how the stars appear to drift much closer now we've come this far. "Where will this lead?" I hear you say, somewhere in my imaginings, I answer you without a word, let's just see what the future brings. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (10-03-2003 05:13 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I just love this... and whose to say: Should we begin to make this bond, would I then feel you pull away ? As words are not a magic wand they have no powers to make you stay. words to me have a lot of staying power..if followed through... nice, very nice Dr. M |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woohoo Dr.Moo I like this yea I do SUCH HEART! |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
very good indeed. a little reminiscent of my mind. thank you Peace, Joe |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
nakd, Thanks so much, i,m glad you found this to your liking. Had the system not crashed I would have edited the one short line, but , now I may let it alone. Doc Wayout, High praise indeed ,sir. I thank you muchly. Doc n2dmystic, Why, thank you , for your kind words. Doc |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Good morning, Doctor! I have become one of your regular readers over the past month or so. I like your stuff sooo well that I thought I'd mosee over here in a search to see what else you've written. Has anyone every told you that you take nice x-rays before? Especially of the funnybone. I enjoy your humor and wit in a lot of your poems, however, this one does lead to a different imagination. Whoever she is doc, I bet you have her attention with this one! Good luck! Sadie |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sadie, Thanks, and no, I can't say anybody's quite put it like that before. Of all the forms and pieces that I write, the most rewarding are the ones that get a chuckle out of someone. Thanks again. Doc |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doc~ This is just FANTABULOUSLY gorgeous~ More than a *smile* ... this one gives a  ~*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, dearest Doc, by George, I think you'e found the ultimate cure, embracing tomorrow with a smile! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes...I like it |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, Thanks. Coming from a "fantabulously" gifted person such as yourself, I'm honored. Doc Noah, Thanks again friend. Be well. Doc passing shadows, Thanks. A little walk in the clouds. Doc |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Poifect... simply poifect... Gotta love your style, Doc...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Doc...I loved the pleasant invite of meandering, but the construct of this particularly caught my eye: "Yet, if you'll walk with me awhile along this path beneath the blu- est skies that I have ever seen then, "magic", might occur to you. I visit here, most times alone, companionship's a pleasant change. Together we can watch the sun- light fade, and more than passing strange," That carrying over of syllables added some interest for me--as I find it made the verse that much more fluid. Thanks for the read, Doc!  always good... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, Thanks. I wrote this as is, in iambic octometer, was going to make it eight iambs per line, but decided they would be too long, hence the " carry-over". I guess that's allowed, it seemed to read without that much interruption except for the one short line which I already mentioned. I'm glad you liked. Doc |
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