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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I wonder if people are like The Big Bang in its tumultuous implosion with pieces energized and banned. Pieces distantly swirling for eons Until nature’s affinity Finds itself, reaching, with its grasping fingers to dearly fashion a new earthly pelf Like the cluster of many speck of persons placed among our souls Each individual connecting like rainbow’s drops blending from incomplete to whole. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
only if you're on a plane 25,000 feet up |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
To anyone reading this, I apologize if my message was not clear and misunderstood-- I have a particular interest in theories of the earth's creation and was attempting to express how bits of people come together to make us. After re-reading it and response, I realize it could have held a negative meaning to some. If I offend anyone, I do apologize. Sadelite |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
As a farm girl, I leave you with this quote: "Some days you step in it, and some days you don't!" I just haven't been able to get the right words out today not even in my responses. I think it's time to put the cap on the pen--I have a feeling the ink won't flow for a while. Again, my apologies for my lack of perception. Sincerely, Sadelite |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Don't apologize because we read your words to mean something different...and don't stop writing. It's all a process...some of us write clearly what we mean and many others are harder to decipher but we enjoy all kinds on here ..it would be boring otherwise. And we learn from each other this way. *s Maureen |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
ya know what, i think you're right... i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sadelite~ 'Each individual connecting like rainbow’s drops blending from incomplete to whole' I totally enjoyed the perspective in this piece~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nothing negative taken here by me...I was just saying it all comes together when you're above it all, looking down, not in the middle of it. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Passing Shadows, Thanks for your response! I must need to get some sleep! I totally, totally misinterpretted what I thought I heard you thinking! (I take it you got my e-mail.) The moral of the story is to never think too much! Right? Have a good evening. I hope you have better luck at going to bed than I am! Sadie |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thanks everyone for your responses. I've got to write these things with more simplicity--even I misinterpretted my own writing! Now, that's pretty bad! Thanks for your support. Sadie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sadie, I wouldn't change a thing here, sweet friend, sometimes we write poetry at first that seems nonsense and even insane, but believe me, when you get a bit older you will find a whole new meaning in this same poem and who knows, it may be a favorite of yours you understand! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, write on, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Sadelite, my mother has a theory... that as well as a physical "big bang" there was a spiritual one that coincided. God, father of all and Infinite being, in His ever expanding consciousness, created us..... choice, necessity, growth. We hold a small part of God in us... everything does and this is how we are connected to the universe. We are truly the stuff of stars... trying to get home. I enjoyed the write.... I too may have taken you out of context... but the philosophical astronomer in me says nay! Sherry   [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (11-08-2003 03:34 AM).] |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Brad, Glad you liked it. Stop by again. I've read some of your poems, too-- you've got some pretty deep thinking going on there. Sadelite nakdthoughts, Thanks for your encouraging words. I was wrong--I will pick up a pen again. Gee that makes three times today that I've been wrong! Three's a charm, right? Write. Once again, thank you. Sadelite mytuesdaywishes, Really? Thank you for taking time to reflect upon this. Have a good day. Sadelite Marge Tindal, Thanks, Marge. I'm glad you like the perspective. Stay around for a while and it'll probably change. That's one of the reasons I chose the user name, Sadelite-- because I always orbit, never seeing the same thing the same way until I'm on my second orbit, if then. Some call it fickle. I call it perspective (at least at times!) Enjoy the day. Sadelite |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Mistletoe Angel, Thank you for sharing those bits of wisdom. I bet you're right! Enjoy the weekend. Sadelite Magicmystery, Yes, we're on the same wavelength, Sherry! The philosophical astronomer in you was correct. You do in fact understand what I was orbiting toward in my write. Thanks for sharing your mother's theory, too. I hadn't thought of it in all those terms. I hope you're able to experience the eclipse. Sadelite |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this the other day, Sade, and was interrupted before I could respond. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sadie, yes I got your email and I thank you  You're a sweetheart for thinking of other people like that. I did not have any bad feelings about this poem and even if I did, you have a right to post what you want (within the board guidelines) without being criticized or judged for your views. This poem just made me think of being on a plane and looking down to see all the people together in a space that seems so small, but when you land, you're right back in the middle of the fighting and seperation and distance...with their own lives and their own battles... please don't be so hard on yourself...you are a welcome part of the family here |
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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
blending from incomplete to whole. I like those words...and don't feel you have offended...I think you painted a very nice picture for us to look at and reflect upon. We all have our opinions...and this being a place to allow expression...is just right for what you have shared... So, take that cap off the pen..and keep goin!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I very much enjoyed the read! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Very like indeed. Sometimes the pieces are recalled by gravity and sometimes they're gone, leaving a void behind that will only be filled by another lost bit captured from another outporing of soul. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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