»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #29
»
Like Birds
| Open Poetry #29 |
|
Like Birds |
|
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
|
Like birds These poems are wild going somewhere anywhere in air floating on the current in the waves of battling poles latched to a tree they are stinging me feathers supplicating fettered by a turbulence of thought caught in the frightful claws of hunger and draught these poems are wild their whistle is darned to destiny and is chained that way across the fabric of while living on vibration and fighting gravity |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"these poems are wild their whistle is darned to destiny" And, I love the way you let them fly free Martie! Wonderful, uplifting..made me smile! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
When it comes to you I guess I would think of you a HUGE flock of birds then Martie, the poems that come from wherever you find them are of the best down one could ever find, and I am here once again to feed the birds. This was fantastic. |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads Martie, I had flashbacks of Hitchcock's movie...and I'll bet all along you intended that, didn't you? You know, Hitchcock was a very poetic man in the way he orchestrated his movies... he would have liked this poem very much! |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Somehow it always makes sense.  |
||
|
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I'm going to cry now! You have just written a piece I am never going to be able to match with the ill words I have. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
||
|
pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
nice one |
||
|
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Tumblings of turbulence Eddy in the wind As your words weave Into my mind. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
||
|
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"floating on the current in the waves of battling poles" ...so good! Thank you.  |
||
|
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
your words soar Martie - Paul |
||
|
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
your words are unmatchable, this is one of best poems ever......I just love this metaphor *smile* absolutely love this!! |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
these poems are wild their whistle is darned to destiny and is chained that way across the fabric of while living on vibration and fighting gravity smiling softly, Martie love this line darned to destiny.... darn...this is excellent writing hon. love it. |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
in the waves of battling poles latched to a tree they are stinging me as if they just HAVE to get out Beautiful writing, My God Martie xxoo |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"These poems are wild" Yes...and I love them that way. "if you won't let me fall for you |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
these poems are wild their whistle is darned to destiny and is chained that way across the fabric of while living on vibration and fighting gravity Excellent writing as aways, Martie. Just beautiful  Hugs  Ethel |
||
|
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Let 'em fly, sweet lady! Rest assured they will come to roost in just the right places.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
feathers supplicating fettered by a turbulence of thought caught in the frightful claws of hunger and draught these poems are wild their whistle is darned to destiny and is chained that way across the fabric of while living on vibration and fighting gravity ========================== which is exactly why I put so many of yours in me mothy library.  Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
||
|
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martie Perhaps it is the wilderness in this poem that is so attractive to me? "Like birds" * "These poems are wild" Excellent opening lines, as are those that follow... ice/ford |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So that is how you do it! The energy in this write was absolutely electrifying and sounded so spontaneous! Your poetry is alive!  EA |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Such a feathered flutter~ Me WUB it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Martie, as all your poems, this was awesome...thank you for sharing.  Wishing you a great weekend ahead. with lotsw lots of sunshine and a great aroma of jasmine in the air...smiles and hugs |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Smiling with enjoyment... I liked this very much, Martie. *S* |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) They sure do, and your poems are sooooooo versatile just as birds migrational patterns upon many different environments! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
