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Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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0 posted 2003-11-07 05:04 AM


Just a handshake
Can make us wake.

And let us forget
What we thought we should get.

For a while she was the one
But i think she is, the one that just gone.

With a handshake
A new life we can make.

With a second of thought
We are the life making Lord.  

See us soon
just look at the moon.

Smile

Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (11-07-2003 05:14 AM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-11-07 06:35 AM


Jes, this is a good poem. I liked it.
I can't remember if I welcomed you to
PIP or not, so....
                  

Hugs  
Ethel

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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2 posted 2003-11-07 07:30 AM


Thanks for the welcome though i think you welcomed mee already smile.

But hugs back Ethel

Smile

Jes


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