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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-06 06:24 PM



this gnawing pain  
rises and makes touch unbearable
my eyes seeing past the pretense of all being well
and waiting for time to tell
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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KristieSue
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1 posted 2003-11-06 06:26 PM


is there any way to get past that?

:-) like this...

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-11-06 06:28 PM


I hear you and feel you in this.
Crystal

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3 posted 2003-11-06 06:39 PM


Wynter~

BIG HUGS SWEETIE~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-11-07 04:20 AM


waiting, waiting, waiting....it never ends
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5 posted 2003-11-07 06:41 AM


Maureen, I wish these hugs could be for real....
but they are in my heart, my friend....
        

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-07-2003 06:42 AM).]

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