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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-11-06 01:17 PM

O' these screams,
the infernal screams!
They petrify my spine, the
pulsation
of the tones,
tend to weaken.

There are no ways to
balance the unbalanced
if the unbalanced wishes to be so

Covering the punctures in the earth,
we've
created
monsters.

The sirens howl,
and in disillusion, they are traitors
to the ear.
The terror held in pitch,
we see not the warning.. in advance,
locking the noise in chambers.

There are no ways to
balance the unbalanced
if the unbalanced wishes to be so

In sensual markings lies an answer,
An emblem of martyrdom.

The body of silence..
The blood of abhorrence..

Quiet, you accursed screams!
My bones
are
breaking.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-11-06 01:20 PM

Oh Meg...

You humble me.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-11-06 01:24 PM

"we see not the warning.. in advance,
locking the noise in chambers."

yes indeed ;(

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-11-06 03:03 PM

ooh ooh ooh Meg
this made me think instantly
of someone sticking a needle
in my spine
Beautiful writing
xxoo

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2003-11-06 03:05 PM

Meg this is visually descriptive writing, very well done.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-11-06 03:56 PM

There are no ways to
balance the unbalanced
if the unbalanced wishes to be so

then perhaps the unbalanced is the perfection of it all?

Meg, your astounding!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-11-06 08:38 PM

WWhoa! I agree with all above.

M

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-11-06 09:06 PM

Quiet, you accursed screams!
My bones
are
breaking.

sorry....I'll tell the carrots to shut up.

no seriously Meg...this is beauliful in all of it's darkness and the disgusting picures it makes my head form. I needed this.

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-11-06 11:12 PM

you never dull.shiny bladed words.yes.yes

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-11-07 02:24 AM

being a Libra, I sure know about that unbalanced stuff

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-11-07 08:58 AM

There are no ways to
balance the unbalanced
if the unbalanced wishes to be so

~*~

How well only a very few of us know...

Keep it up.
You're only getting better with each line.

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