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Open Poetry #29

In your eyes

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

0 posted 2003-11-07 03:26 AM

In your eyes,
I can see,
My dreams,
Realising.

In your heart,
I can see,
myself,
residing.

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

1 posted 2003-11-07 03:35 AM

Little by little, I'm loosing you I can see.
Bit by bit, your love is slipping away from me. This is what I read in this write. Am I right?

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

2 posted 2003-11-07 03:43 AM

My heart in two pieces melt together as one smile.

True love goes to the heart and eyes with a glimt.

I liked it smile.

Jes

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-07 04:14 AM

oh....this is a beauty!

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2003-11-07 08:01 AM

The unusual punctuation makes this poem distinct..as well as the arrangement of very short lines, that make clear, the messege..
Enjoyed the read....ice

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-11-07 08:06 AM

I see a beatufiul wish and dream come true and promise of a great future for the both of you. Lovely write

Good Morning

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-11-07 08:11 AM

ambrish,

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-11-08 06:50 PM

A silky jewel...one of my favorites...James

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