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Lotus Breeze
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since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

0 posted 2003-11-06 07:46 PM

To be with you when bright sunshine wakes two
To look and see you first with eyes of blue

My day could be started in holding near
Secure just then and safe from all my fear.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-11-06 08:14 PM

What a peaceful beautiful way to begin the day. Thank you for sharing this, Lotus.

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2003-11-06 08:15 PM

MMmmhmmm...nothin' better than that! :-)

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-11-06 08:36 PM

LotusBreeze~
You 'try' couplets VERY WELL sweet lady~

These are lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-07 02:33 AM

very beautiful

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-11-07 09:16 AM

a few lovely couplets upon which to view
as I gaze upon this new day with you.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-11-07 10:17 AM

well, what a beauty, lovely gentle thoughts.

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2003-11-07 01:41 PM

A very excellent effort

Gloom

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-11-07 02:29 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet Lotus Breeze, your beautiful couplets couplet such wonderful sunshine and joy across these robin-egg blue pages! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2003-11-07 04:34 PM

Very Beautiful thoughts
Gracefully expressed.

I enjoyed this {with a single tear of joy}

Sherry

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-11-08 06:43 PM

Lovely...James

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