Open Poetry #29 |
Another View From Heaven |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The angels kept watching over the boy and girl After 3 days had passed they were still fighting But on the 4 th day they saw something was changing They kept watching to see what it could be One angel said to the other, "Could it be that they are in love again Or just really really good friends?" The other angel replied, "That surely looks more than just a friendly kiss I think they finally worked through all their differences." Then God stepped in and told the angels, "I told you to give it time And look, now they seem to be in love again." The angels smiled and replied in unison, "Yes God you told us to give them time And look at what happened Love has blossomed once more And we can tell her heart hurts no more." Then God looked down upon the boy and girl and said, "I knew their love was not dead. They said some pretty harsh things to each other And they needed the time time to cool off a bit." The angels finally said, "Let's give them a gift That will help them make sure This never happens again." Then God replied, "I have already have given them a gift A gift of wisdom And with that gift They may learn to be nicer to one another And not be so harsh when they are mad." They continued looking down over the boy and girl And God gave the angels a job To gaurd over the boy and girl For the rest of their lives Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very nice Julie, much truth in these words. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Julie, I know that this is just wishful thinking, but it is a great poem with a great message just the same. Wisdom is remembering and not making the same mistakes again be it in a renewed relationship or any new one that might come about over time. Give it time. Sherry
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
It isn't just wishful thinking. It's just as the poem says. Trust me, we had worse fights back in January last year, I think. All we needed was a bit of time to cool off. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Julie, this was simply precious! ~ and from reading ThunderMage's reply, the story may indeed have a happy ending, or should I say, a new and happy beginning! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) All I can say to you is be careful, for if at any point you feel the suspicion or recurrent heartache seeping in that you have felt already here, try and let go, for if you carry this burden and this same heartache comes back, it could well be an emotional trap! (sigh) I surely hope this love has turned a new golden leaf, but also be cautious, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful words of life...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nice dialogue with a happy end. We all grow through the fights. Love, Margherita |
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