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On A Quiet Night
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On A Quiet Night |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Fractured filigrees of whiskey glass. It's lonely here with time to pass, so many years from home, and love, I'm nowhere. ©2003 by icebox |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Icebox...I very much like the feeling of this write, and it's perfect. The sentiment is perfect. I don't think you're nowhere, but I know where that place is myself, we just don't stay there. I've missed reading you, just starting to catch up. And saving this one. ~K~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i'd have one with you but all i've got left is brandy..ugh |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...I'll take the brandy, it's November...you can have my whiskey.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IceBox~ I don't do the whiskey ... but I LOVE - 'Fractured filigrees' That conjures up so many images in my mind~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
It is nice, when I am not able to sleep (like tonight) to come in here and read a poem such as this........ :-) The poem is lyrical, and although it is a great short song, I seem to want more....but that might weaken the impact, so I will just hum along with it as it is... >>>ice/ford<<< |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
kahlil in my mood turpentine would do..grumble winter is cognac season |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...heated over a flame, whilst stirring the fruit cake batter, haha...look what you started, Icebox! [This message has been edited by Kahlil (11-07-2003 12:24 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welp...I reckon we're nowhere together then  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "so many years from home" a profound statement hugs! [This message has been edited by Martie (11-07-2003 12:36 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yep..that is my house every weekend...  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
awwwww comeon folks, it's Friday, Yippeee, that outa account for somethin? NO? Ok, Ok, I'll sit down and shut my mouth But...you are somewhere and always will be...and you've written significant words, communicating art...sound...synergy, you are the rhyme of us....the beginning of tomorrows...you are the mint in my tea the light in the sky! You are the sail on a tall ship...and the wings on the wind...so, cheer up...and lets get jiggy with it.... Smiles and hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this.. but you are right here....with me. And, well...the rest of the Passion's crew. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and here you are! (see I can find you even when you're nowhere) and I DID come looking for you. missed ya ib...save a shot for me? (make that two) okay. three.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is sad but well-written, sweet friend, now gaze up from the glass and out beyond the window and go on home! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Oh, stop contemplating your navel, for crying-out-loud. You are everywhere! Glide on! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thanks for your insightful support. |
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