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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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tangled in red threaded hope unravelled she wishes me sleep i pray her dreams [This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-07-2003 12:36 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Raph, I can really feel this...like standing on the outer ledge of a tall building, afraid to breathe, afraid of the fall, and still a tiny bit hopeful.... ~K~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes its all of that and more, but puleeze what in the world is Rubheir, Rhoum |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks kahlil, she'd never admit to hope she's incredibly stubborn..which is very unlike me..  Mish..Rubber Room..i'm being witty again..and failing miserably it would seem..grins |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
i'm listening to Mozart's "Requiem' right now, and will drag myself away from any "dark" reply.. so simply another "deep wit" hold all needed to be said. all things of yours possess depth, which is most incredible |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
ou, almost forgot, thanks for bringing my stuff back to resurrection, always  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
My pleasure Petre and i apologize, i wish more people would read but they'll come around. As for music i couldn't possibly handle 'Requiem" in my mood so it's Vivaldi for me..my god how he makes strings weep |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
strings u say. that gives me an idea to to try to enjoy Paganini if i'm still non-suicidal after Mozart  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
as always...  Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Great thoughts in tight brevity(I've never heard of loose brevity, come to think of it). Ken |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sweet |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph? a beautiful wish between the both of you May it be granted (Requiem is amazing, but yes maybe Bach?) *smile* xxoo |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
What about Nick Cave, come on, guys! ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Rubheir Rhoum" ??? ~ Are you referring to a rubber room with walls that you feel you--and your creative thoughts--are bouncing off of at times?  EA |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
hei Nick Cave is awesome, no doubt |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...often times Aenimal's thinking schemes and arrangement of words remind me of Nick's compositions...emotional, passionate, humble...~K~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
P Non suicidal after requiem? is that possible..grins aw shucks Lauren thanks grins thanks Kayjay hey red..hugs you thanks sue..no bach to nice Kahlil not bad but if we're gonna sink deep i'm going with trent and Nine inch nails..... Linda that's the one. mmmmm bouncy.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Big compliment thanks Kahlil |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
NIN, not bad Raph, yet dark emotions seep through Midnight Syndicate, and the "Norwegian folk" of Tristania, Theatre of Tragedy, and my personal favorite The Sins of thy Beloved... negativity rules even daytime...unfortunately  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
... Unravelled indeed...well, what can I say...I don't know... Thank you...you've managed to say much within these few lines. I'm privileged. Sharing is good, my friend. And finding new friends is a good thing too. Heart hugs  K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"Sweet dreams are made of this"...... Wonderful Bello  fate is not just |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oooh, Tristania.. I like Seibenburgen... Cradle..heh Raph.. just don't start writing all Cannibal Corpse, and you'll be fine.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Petre I realize there are better..but Trent..just has a way of doing it that feeds me K heart hugs indeed it is a good thing Grazie bellisima..mwuuuuuuuuah I used to sing here comes the rain again ad naseum as a kid. just reminded me of that..funny..weird.yes Dixie i always make you tear..you gotta stop looking directly at the pic Meggles! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm late again. (serenity's new rule: the day after is not late for serenity--grin, lemme try explaining that to my kids, eh?) tangled in red threaded hope unravelled she wishes me sleep i pray her dreams But seriously, there is a lot here, you people just drive me nuts saying all this in so few words. It's like the old ink blot thing-- "red threaded hope" I'm not sure what that means, but I like the way it sounds, and it resonates a quality of despair to my ear. (But that's the thing with inkblots--you see what you feel, yes?) Hugs you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice K, grins i'll tell you about the red thread later Thanks Susan I appreciate it |
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