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wordwizard
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0 posted 2003-11-08 09:17 AM



There's a way to world on a travel package
voyage the seas in company with baggage
arrive at port, unload friendly gear
reception is tepid among those who fear

the arrival of maiden voyages around the seas
enter ports of call for those to please
through a village bazaar with wares exposed
there's a flower stand with rose upon rose..

the passionate kind with colors to attract
a bundle to wrap with petals intact
sweet with a nectar to attract love's prey
would you come to grasp it or stay away?

rose flowers and thorns are all collected
lapels are adorned, gift cards selected
will your heart be intact for another romance
and return to the stand on another instance?

© Copyright 2003 ecrivan

[This message has been edited by wordwizard (11-08-2003 09:19 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-08 10:15 AM



One can only live on hope...at times.

Thank you, Martin!

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2 posted 2003-11-08 11:44 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, here's wishing for your end table to always be adorned with welcoming roses! (big hugggsssssss) This is a wonderful write, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-11-08 12:14 PM


thought-provoking write...good question
wordwizard
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4 posted 2003-11-08 06:31 PM


Here had thought of Oscar Wilde's poem on the sparrow and the rose and the film Fatal
Attraction.


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