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ROCKyuppie
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0 posted 2003-11-06 08:51 PM


Set Free

Set free, set loose,
The pain, though dwendled,
Still stabs clean,

Never again will the face be seen,
Never diminished, Lets wipe the slate clean.



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Greeneyes
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1 posted 2003-11-06 09:26 PM


Lets wipe the slate clean''

Powerful first post....enjoyed


     

Welcome to Passions....We are glad you are here....

    
Greeneyes~



i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-06-2003 09:28 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-11-06 10:57 PM


Interesting first post. I look forward to reading more fo yuour thoughts.
Welcome to Passions

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3 posted 2003-11-06 11:16 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, here the blackboard's always open and the slate will always be cleaned for you, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-11-06 11:28 PM


Rocky~
Welcome to Passions ... enjoyed the read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-07 02:26 AM


would be nice if it was that easy
ambrish
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6 posted 2003-11-07 03:30 AM


a good one
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