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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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Funky smell I'm gonna tell its no sin to break wind. PU! What did you do? It smells worse than an old pair of shoes. Go outside so I can breathe is my plead. People stare with an ugh for their beginning to choke. Me oh my look at those bugs drop like flies,I wonder why. My eyes are watering,I want to cry. Funky smell I'm gonna tell Its no sin to break wind. Enough is enough you win.......... [This message has been edited by froggy (11-06-2003 01:34 AM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so you know my dad then  rofl.... this is funny... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
You usualy write sweet scented poems, but this one stinks! lol (j/k froggy..) >>>ice/ford<<< |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Snicker snicker snicker snicker snicker! I see you have added to this from the original I remember mean and green. If it was that bad I suppose it is a good thing one's head was not under the covers! ROFLMAO! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Sea, I don't know your dad LOLbut if your dad is anything like mine was then I guess I would know yours too. Ice, Yes this poem is a stinky one you might say. EvocativeVerse2, Yes I did a little tweaking with this poem since last you read it. Oh God please don't remind me of the underneath covers LOL. I guess there is a little stinker in all of us. Thank-you all for the nice comments. :-) |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
roflmao...this is my father and my brother...blehe LOL Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
{uncontrollable belly laughings.. till the sides hurt and fall on the floor... Get back in the seat and do some more.} This was so cute... What is it about "cutting the cheese"?... everyone is so proud but no one wants to claim it's theirs. Made me laugh. Sherry |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This made me laugh. Crystal |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you KristieSue. I know what you mean lol. Every family has one or two I think. Thank-you magicmystery. Yes it is about cutting the cheese.LOL Thank=you angelblueyes. glad you got a laugh. Thank-you all again. :-) |
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