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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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My half asleep thoughts, turned legal documents Into soft brushes, landscaping a drowning canvas Swirling poignant-life building blocks Like dominos exaggerating sincerely Into my neighborhood, seriously expanding Like evening ghosts, over large cities asleep No one believed? Filling cracks on sidewalks Strolling with a whistle, despite frowning suburbs Easing hours, soothes the addiction Of a fairly frequent meaning, spending the night Offering opinions and clear meaning bread By a well-defined lilt of lines Consumed by wind, spewing out resolutions of well meaning art Then….the last thing I ever expected to confront Jumped into my path like a lion on the prow Now I’m Wondering, “Why has he not been fed”? Having merged into my path, without warning I welcomed the creature with human contact Blowing my breath in his face….looking deep into his eyes This drew stillness…he purred, his hunger satisfied Communal survival became our point of view Ignoring the bigots who were very very poor Yes, out of fear, ignorance and a yearning for brew They came begging for a self-loathing interviews Baptizing frail creatures having a profound impact On a new world order….one of which was warming me For years…trying to get in…little did I know All I had to do…was open up my skin Now I wear a zipper for easy access |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Leej, Interestimg write, enjoyed the read. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love it...and overwhelmed by it. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmm....wear a zipper...yeah...that may be the answer |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I'm always overwhelmed by your writings, in a good way.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lee? beautiful, this is quite amazing *smiling here* On a new world order….one of which was warming me For years…trying to get in…little did I know All I had to do…was open up my skin yes yes yes xxoo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So, you have found the secret... I wish I had thought to put a zipper...but which side? Front or back? Well Done, Lee.. |
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