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rambling_words
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since 2003-10-29
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London, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-11-05 03:31 PM


I have been floating through this life like a ghost
I can see but I can not be seen
my white skin shivering in the white fog hovering
there are no moon shadows tonight only silhouttes of colouring leaves
November candles burn and wooden clocks turn
seasons change and time passes
I fall further inside myself
lost in my memories that are really regrets made up of mistakes
love she is no angel of mine
wilted wings of pearls swimming in an ocean of shells
voices echoing across wires that pierce through my heart
cutting my soul in lyrics of a melancholy nature
London is only lights that are slowly turning themselves off
invisible hands praying behind pulled blinds
random window thoughts of what hides off in the distance
where the train travels and where the rain drops
from Philadelphia to anywhere along the East Coast
it does not matter it is further than I will ever be
romance is a postcard that never arrives in time
I never stay in the same place too long
it gets too hard to say goodbye
to friends that slip through the fingers of these fragile hands
I am too young to have these skeleton bones
I am getting to old to have these broken dreams
tomorrow I could do anything
but I will not do anything
it is easier to stay inside my thoughts
the safety of familiarity
the suffocating of similiarity
it is killing me
slowly inside out
I know this
but I can not stop this
doubting of my abilities to function in this life
which is as beautiful as it has ever been if you could see it with me
instead I wait blinding myself to the sight of the unknown.




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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-11-05 03:45 PM


Ah but this piece just aches John.
How are things in the Forest City?  Pretty I'll bet..
I miss it there..my home town..walking in Victoria Park..
Lovely melancholy piece of work here...much enjoyed...
and you are never ever alone..not in Passions.
Hugs~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2003-11-05 04:06 PM


"I am too young to have these skeleton bones
I am getting to old to have these broken dreams
tomorrow I could do anything
but I will not do anything
it is easier to stay inside my thoughts
the safety of familiarity
the suffocating of similiarity
it is killing me
slowly inside out
I know this
but I can not stop this
doubting of my abilities to function in this life
which is as beautiful as it has ever been if you could see it with me
instead I wait blinding myself to the sight of the unknown."

This reminded me of someone who is now wishing she'd at least tried.  


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