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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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it came upon me that vomitus feeling you know which I mean the kind that makes your heart beat fast and palms sweat and you just cant stop looking behind your shoulder even though no one is there there is look again see? nobody home but still . . . the fingers creep like bones skeletal marrow red blood lips I saw her teeth they were sharp and pointed through lips gnarled like rigormortis and I bellowed aloud, "Leave Us Be!", only to feel a fool but still . . you never do know times like these especially when I still felt those bones cemetary drones like carrion creeping I chewed her up and spew forth this |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Beautiful poem, gory as it was it was very well written! Love, |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
ewwwww....definitely fits the day. Great job! Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Great job of a write here. Good Halloween images within....Yikes! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
good thing you spit that one out LOL, but you can write fear as well as love |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I just finished an essay at school on 'fear'.. this reminded me of it. Certainly fitting to the day.. and yes, definitely a good one to have spit out Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Reminds me of those re-occurring nightmares, where I'm running from my fear and getting no where fast! Very spooky stuff, you had me here Tweets. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Sue, this is powerful and poignant, sweet friend, this is perfect for Halloween and truly strikes right down the field! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love your new picture, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well Baby, I'm happy to see that THAT isn't stuck in your craw anymore! You do make me smile...even in the face of this *grin* I love you Keep the faith! "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
ahhhhhh! I understand now.....yes yesyesyes ees cauled Exercizing...yes? grin x your sizzling umm..wait I will get it ex aneurism crap excoriating? getting close? I will get it just give me a few more minutes  this is awesome now smile you you lucky lady and no more thought paid to it ok? exorcism |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! love this write, as I do all of yours! love the new pic! |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
"the fingers creep like bones skeletal marrow red blood" Nice! Perfect for the day, Enjoyed. Rob One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you "spew" good ( I mean well)  M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ wranx's response. *G* An intense, excellent write... and I love the new picture! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are an amazing talent! Eric |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I second Eric, you really are talent in the "painting" ..... wonderful and brilliant... HUGSSSS Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like carrion creeping I chewed her up and spew forth she never really cashed out anyhow.....but it helped to chew her up and spit her out anyhow just to make sure |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Kellie was a "visitation" of sorts Thank you Kristie ahah imagination . . . Barry you know better *smile* thank you Kacy Ohh mann I HAD to I was chokin thank you Thanks Alyssa . . . yes indeed it was Thanks Bluesy . . you know it was like that but I was awake "yikes" Noah you are so sweet so good to me thank you God, Ed - YES gone gone gone (evilthing) GONE I love you xxoo Hey Bri well for Ed yes an ex- aneurism ahaha that made me smile no no more thought paid it Is uhh that an order? *smile* point taken Thank you Brian xxoo Thank you Dixie - thanks a lot *smile* Hey Rob, good to see you reading me thank you ahaha Maureen that made me smile thank you Thanks suthern, and yes he is a sneaky one that Ed up there . . . *smile* Eric - wow that really got a huge smile thank you Lauren thank you so much goodness what a beautiful response Michel nope she didn't your right not even close but yes she needed to be . . . yes spit out *smile* Thanks guys xxoo |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
That's why I only sleep in the graveyard when I'm drunk. This piece rocks with apprehension and fear of the unknown. Thanks, coyote |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahaha coyote PERFECT YES indeed thank you xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the fingers creep like bones skeletal marrow red blood lips I saw her teeth they were sharp and pointed through lips gnarled like rigormortis" Oh yes! This was fantastic! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so much Susan xxoo |
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