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allamericanjoe
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since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

0 posted 2003-11-04 11:41 PM

Every time she comes around,
I hear her voice, no other sound.
Everywhere I look I see,
Her face in places it cannot be.

My love for her has grown so grand,
My knees get weak, I cannot stand.
She does not know the depth of emotion,
Within my heart would rival the ocean.

I hear her name upon the air,
The wind it speaks of her so fair.
I see her in a glass reflection.
My hearts one fear is her rejection.

I hear her call my name aloud,
She is not there, within the crowd.
Her name like a song gets stuck in my head,
From the time I wake up, until I go to bed.

Even in sleep there is no reprieve,
Constantly dreams of her I retrieve.
I love her so much I hardly believe,
My mind to be able these thoughts to concieve.

But does she love me with analogous force?
Or will crooning for her get me nothing but hoarse?

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

[This message has been edited by allamericanjoe (11-04-2003 11:43 PM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-11-05 12:09 PM

"She does not know the depth of emotion,
Within my heart would rival the ocean.

I hear her name upon the air,
The wind it speaks of her so fair"

awww....dang, this is so completely sweet...any girl (woman) would love have this, you should give it to her! So romantic

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-11-05 12:13 PM

how neat, I was reading you and you were reading me, that was cool. I have posted many Joe, if you want to read them, look in the top for the paper with the magnifying glass, that will take you to other poems, if you want to of course lol.

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

3 posted 2003-11-05 12:17 PM

I definately will! Thanks for the tip, I hadn't even thought of that.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-05 04:18 AM

any woman would be swept off her feet by this

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-11-05 12:31 PM

Joe~
Sweet penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

6 posted 2003-11-05 12:50 PM

being in love is great, huh? :-) If this is specifically for someone, SHOW her :-)

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-11-05 01:09 PM

Oh Wow! Any woman would love to have this written about her!
Wonderful write!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2003-11-05 03:57 PM

Hey Joe

I loved the humour at the end of this, it left me with a smile. I always look forward to reading your words.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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