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Unsure of reciprocation |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC 
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Every time she comes around, I hear her voice, no other sound. Everywhere I look I see, Her face in places it cannot be. My love for her has grown so grand, My knees get weak, I cannot stand. She does not know the depth of emotion, Within my heart would rival the ocean. I hear her name upon the air, The wind it speaks of her so fair. I see her in a glass reflection. My hearts one fear is her rejection. I hear her call my name aloud, She is not there, within the crowd. Her name like a song gets stuck in my head, From the time I wake up, until I go to bed. Even in sleep there is no reprieve, Constantly dreams of her I retrieve. I love her so much I hardly believe, My mind to be able these thoughts to concieve. But does she love me with analogous force? Or will crooning for her get me nothing but hoarse? "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ [This message has been edited by allamericanjoe (11-04-2003 11:43 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"She does not know the depth of emotion, Within my heart would rival the ocean. I hear her name upon the air, The wind it speaks of her so fair" awww....dang, this is so completely sweet...any girl (woman) would love have this, you should give it to her! So romantic  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how neat, I was reading you and you were reading me, that was cool. I have posted many Joe, if you want to read them, look in the top for the paper with the magnifying glass, that will take you to other poems, if you want to of course lol. |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
I definately will! Thanks for the tip, I hadn't even thought of that. "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
any woman would be swept off her feet by this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joe~ Sweet penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
being in love is great, huh? :-) If this is specifically for someone, SHOW her :-) Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Wow! Any woman would love to have this written about her! Wonderful write! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Joe I loved the humour at the end of this, it left me with a smile. I always look forward to reading your words. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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