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Rick
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Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2003-11-05 04:49 AM



ONE PART OF ME

If I could share one part of me

that I would like the world to see

I’d give the wealth within I’ve found

from years I’ve lived, to share around

the part of me that youth did sow

which bloomed to joy that all should know

the part that listened, learnt and gave

the part that everyone should save

the part that gave me strength and will

the part of me, no-one can kill


MY  LOVE

© Copyright 2003 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
PouringJewels
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1 posted 2003-11-05 05:14 AM


I would give all that and more. The good and the bad can come at the drop of a hat. That is what gave us such character.
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2003-11-05 06:23 AM


my my my, you are certainly pouring out strength, wisdom and the wealth you have received within today.  Good Morning Rick...it's raining here and this was the first I've read this morning...what a lovely smile to start the day with..softly spoken and elegantly projected.  God Bless you...and thanks so much.  your kingdom is indeed a castle.  
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-11-05 12:22 PM


Again I'm touched by your heart song.
Beautiful. You can spread these gifts of yours and they will never lessen. More, actually, you will receive back.
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-05 12:52 PM


Rick, I've missed you and all of the "LOVE" that spills out of you and into your 'love'ly poetry!

Love & Light,
Linda

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-11-05 12:54 PM


and I personally thank you for sharing that love with me
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6 posted 2003-11-05 12:58 PM


Rick, I always love reading what you share, especially this...

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

ranidae_poet
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7 posted 2003-11-05 03:04 PM


wow...this was truly a good piece....so inspirational.  thanks for sharing

There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill  and to create.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-11-05 03:12 PM


So beautiful Rick...wonderful writing.
This is exactly what I have come to expect when clicking on your name.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-11-05 03:49 PM


Love. A God-given thing. Something no one can take away from you.
Love,
Terri~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2003-11-05 04:02 PM


Hello Rick

Your words always leave me in awe.

"The richest people in our society
are those who can give without
feeling in any way
diminished by giving
This has nothing to do with money
It has everything to do with feelings
of self-love and abundance"

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
11 posted 2003-11-06 06:06 AM


PouringJewels, thank you for calling in here and sending your reply to me, you are right, it is all of us that gives our character, thank you for sharing.

LeeJ, thankyou for turning my castle into a mountain, your words were very much heart felt and very much appreciated.

Margherita, it is wonderful to read your reply, your words are a gift to me and I accept them with open arms, thank you for again for your visit and sharing.

Dear Linda, I've missed you as well, I have not been writing much of late, but I have missed you all and it is great to be back, thanks for your great reply.

Dear Dixie, sharing the love is wonderful, thankyou for caring enough to care and reply, you are indeed a friend.

KristieSue, thank you for reading and replying, I have so many wonderful friends at passions.

ranidae_poet, thank you for replying, your words were very much appreciated.

Nancy, great to see your reply here, you pay me a great complement and for that I thank you very much, great you could visit.

SharaRose, Terri, thank you for this reply, may love live in us all forever as it lives in your words and your heart.

Dear Sue, again thank you for your reply, always wonderful to see you visit and give your wisdom of words, great to see you here.


To you all my friends, again thank you, all your thoughts were very much appreciated and heart felt, you are all wonderful, thanks for sharing your words here today.

Sincerely always.
Rick


Felinus
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since 2003-08-06
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Princeton
12 posted 2003-11-21 11:22 AM


You share so much - I love the rhythmic flow
this is very touching

A Romantic Heart
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13 posted 2003-11-21 01:11 PM



Love is a beautiful thing to share
Love makes the world go round....

Love is hope..faith....love remains above all and is in all....

Thanks for sharing your love

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
14 posted 2003-11-26 05:14 AM


Felinus, great to see you here, thank you for the lovely reply, very much appreciated.

Dear Romantic heart, wonderful to see you here again, love is something we should all share a lot more of, but time does seem to get in its way, it might be in a word, a look, a touch, to share just a little at least is something that can grow.
Thanks for the reply, hope all is well, take care my friend.

Sincerely
Rick

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