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Talk Twilight |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Talk Twilight ~*Marge Tindal*~ Talk twilight to these eyes Mesmerize the night in sigh Mix indigo from nightly sky Quench awaiting lips in sip Love in taste of honey drip Fluff the dream softer whip Falling free from Milky Way Paper words with gentle say Foreverly is one night away This is the night .. indeed Sow the seed of urgent need Seeking lover in soft plead ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent job of this, very nicely woven together....Now, to just find a billboard about 20 by 20...hmmmmmm |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
The words you send makes me tingle at the sight of twilight. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...such a gentle and warm plea. Hugs! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Fabulous writing here Marge. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, THank you sweety. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Ms. Marge .... thank you for this wonderful write of poem. It is good to read you again. I am grateful for your last email and promise to write soon. Being 'Nurse Nancy' is time consuming and exhausting. But know you are in my thoughts and prayers and I'm sending you lots of loves and hugs. Marti |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahhhh....who could've said it better than you sweet friend. You know I love you  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! just incredible! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Had a demanding flow to it. Nice read Marge. Enjoyed. poe If nothing is something |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mesmerizing, indeed! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Goodness. Golly. I like the feel of these lines. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Goodness, thank you all sooooo much~ I was really just playing with a particular font when this one took off~ Thanks for enjoying where it went~ Magnus~  It's a GREAT day to be a poetess~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Paper words with gentle say I love that line especially... hugs Margie M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutley beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ My favorite too ... no suprise ... we connect again~ LeeJ~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
What happen in your life You are always a Poeet Love Muys |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
YES! YES! Del "Abe" Jones |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Seeking lover in soft plead" ~ I doubt that a moon goddess such as yourself, would have to wait long for such a soft plea to be answered...  Love & Light, EO |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a beautiful write mi lady...simply stunning! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is a very beautiful poem. |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
just absolutely great... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh wow...I like everything about this...and the way you handled the lines...makes me want to go play with words and letters and spaces myself.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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