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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-11-04 03:40 PM



Napping below deck
I hear the woody staccato.
Creaking hawser rope.



© Copyright 2003 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-11-04 03:58 PM


Reminded me of my bunk on the first ship I was on...the 1MC was right above my head..a 3 am man over-board drill nearly sent me out of my skin...

I miss being on the water..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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2 posted 2003-11-04 03:59 PM


Excellent picture you drew
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-11-04 04:21 PM



I could hear it also...well done!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Martie
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4 posted 2003-11-04 08:32 PM


Krawdad...I'm not sure what it is...but I can still hear it.
icebox
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in the shadows
5 posted 2003-11-05 09:11 AM


Funny, this made me think of strong hot coffe and biscuits.  I think it was the smell of salt water.  *smile*

scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2003-11-05 09:56 AM


There is nothing quite like a nap below deck!!  Where did you do the controlled burn, Krawdad?

believe in what your heart feels...

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