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Open Poetry #29

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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2003-11-04 03:40 PM

Napping below deck
I hear the woody staccato.
Creaking hawser rope.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-11-04 03:58 PM

Reminded me of my bunk on the first ship I was on...the 1MC was right above my head..a 3 am man over-board drill nearly sent me out of my skin...

I miss being on the water..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2003-11-04 03:59 PM

Excellent picture you drew

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-04 04:21 PM

I could hear it also...well done!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-11-04 08:32 PM

Krawdad...I'm not sure what it is...but I can still hear it.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2003-11-05 09:11 AM

Funny, this made me think of strong hot coffe and biscuits. I think it was the smell of salt water. *smile*

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2003-11-05 09:56 AM

There is nothing quite like a nap below deck!! Where did you do the controlled burn, Krawdad?

believe in what your heart feels...

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