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rambling_words
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since 2003-10-29
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London, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-11-04 01:37 PM


A flock of Canadian geese fly south over the Thames river
their noise is the only sound I hear on this Thanksgiving morning
perfect v shadows emerge below in the new light of this day
a horizon of thoughts spinning inside my head
images of movies and films of heroes
visions of passions and creations of reflections
those faces we have seen in dreams
those places we have been in dreams
people we may never talk to
streets we may never walk on
cobblestone and golden in my eyes
tears and blue in my eyes
when I see you
for that first time
after that last time
when I let you walk away
the truth hides itself in my soul
waiting for you to free it
if only for my conscious
the sinners sleep less than the prayers
white fog covering Ireland
Irish whistles blowing through the rain of a crying god
her hands on the shoulders of a poet
as he writes for forgiveness
as he writes for loneliness
emptiness that never leaves for long
nothingness that never seems like it will leave
as an October sun rises out of the ground of an August field
harvested and collected by the labour of hands
filmed and framed by the colour of lands
pieces of towns fragmented into our collective memories of movies
New York City and London
Paris and Hollywood
a world cultured by American culture
guns for fire and heroes for hire
so I empty my vase of Chinese characters and place fresh flowers in its water
I believe in the price of freedom on this Thanksgiving morning
but I also questions the methods of protecting this freedom
our red and white coffins are not as filled as those of the red, white and blue
we are small but we do not have to be quiet
when we are asked about the world
it is out there, a place beyond our borders, long and undefended
fresh water lakes and white snow mountains
treasures to offer to the world
treasures to offer to the girl
who could see through my eyes at my world
houses of mirrors reflecting hours of pleasures
simple and sweet
words of love and wisdoms of life
circling like the clouds above waiting to descend out of the blue sky
today is too perfect to be questioned
tomorrow is too far to be questioned
I will be thankful to be living on this Thanksgiving morning
tomorrow I will go back to searching for you
to live in my mind of dreams
films of images and heroes of movies
ordinary people with an extraordinary way of expressing their emotions.



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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-11-04 01:42 PM


uh...hmmm..I am kind of speechless..

How do you see so much?  

How do I see so little?  

Amazing...

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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Louisiana
2 posted 2003-11-05 09:55 AM


her hands on the shoulders of a poet
as he writes for forgiveness
as he writes for loneliness
emptiness that never leaves for long
nothingness that never seems like it will leave

In the midst of so many wonderful lines, a portrait so familiar. *S* I like this very much!

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-11-05 09:59 AM


Incredible story...would you mind if I'd print up and keep this one...very much enjoyed.

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