Open Poetry #29 |
Today Was A Good Day |
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Today was a good day I went with mum and got the car fixed And did schoolwork On a weekend. Drank cappucino from the machine- Ignored the icky spurting. (Like the squirts Ya know?) Next we went and got some flowers For the grandma that ain't mine. And then went on to RK News A semi-christian bookstore. I searched and searched Up and down the aisles for my book "The Art of Faery"... The e-mail said it was now out But RKN must not have got it. So onto old McDonald's For nuggets, sweet and sour (They're the only thing I like there... The rest gives me...Ya know... the squirts...) And into Barnes and Noble, Searching for my beloved book Spent most my time in the New Age section On the ground Next to a lady on her phone. Defeated, hope deflated, I saw a book on Dylan, And drifted to that section But never got to read about him. Something else had caught my eye A big black book with small red font The upraised words were startling... Kurt Cobain Journals I nearly cried, I'm not sure why I'm never sure these days, But tore through the crowd, all teary-eyed, To find the Money Mum. I already spent my damned allowence On a CD this Friday, And 25 bucks was out of reach... But Mum just got her paycheck } "Mummy, won't you please buy me This book 'bout Kurt Cobain, I'll pay you back after Christmas ends And love you crazy-insane!" Relucant, like she always is, She moved into the check-out, And I read some Edgar Poe, While eyeing my new, beat-up book. The man tells mum he hasn't seen That book for a long time, And that we're lucky we have found it, Despite the way it's ruined. And on we go to blue Best Buy To look at the soon to be mine Scanner sitting prettily Upon the ugly shelves. Mummy's happy it's not too much And I'm surprised it's that much at all, But she promises me it's mine for Christmas, And I smile and thank her profusely. And onto find some greasy dinner- Steak N Shake it is. I have a big ol' chicken salad... That's now sitting in my fridge. And mummy, can we please go home now I didn't get much sleep Last night or the night before that night, Or the one before that either. And so we finally go home, Where I crawl into my bubble And finally allow the tears To flow upon my pillow. But... Today was a good day. -Note: Yeah. I know. I was lifting my own eyebrows, while watching this come out O_o I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. --Chang Tzu [This message has been edited by KoKo (11-01-2003 10:12 PM).] |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
i cried for Kurt, too. the genius who swept away all these 80' hair, lip-stick "Poison" bands. hm, did you talk about Bob Dylan or Dylan Thomas (both are great)... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks for the read and the comment Petre PS: That'd be Bob |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks for taking me with you... I've had days like that. You share very well. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
here's to hoping ALL of your days are good. just like your poetry. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
LIKED how you did this and made the routine interesting |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the Money Mum" Oh I wear that title very well... This reminded me of the Saturdays my daughter and I have gone shopping...wonderful.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed this day-in-the-life-of-Koko ! An authentic Saturday scenario that is most-likely identifiable by many of your readers. I recall days such as this! ~ as both the teenager and the mother! Linda |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Very nice read. All the way thru. poe If nothing is something |
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