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evidently “no” to evidence so evident
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evidently “no” to evidence so evident |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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the face is gray. evidently, emotions are suffocated. paradox is when everything is fled to seek a thread evidently… from transience to extension is never obsolete nor is pathology any treatment is harmless an useless. wine darker than blood, yet both resonance in red splashed on deterioration is the feel sensible to touch or to constriction?.. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
finally i brided my sister ( darkatnoon) to join the PiP. she was shy to such raw exposure of poetry, yet i calm her; not too many people would read her stuff anyway  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
pandonov It all depends on the wine. Enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is one of those that change color in differing lights, clever work as evidenced by your title..evidently. Grin? Would love to know the inspiration of this one. (and oh. Tell your sis I said not to sweat it--I used to worry over every word until someone informed ME not to worry-- "no one understands a thing you write anyway"  )and |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
ha ha , thx Serenity |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad your sister joined... I now look for your work... don't always comment, but I read. *S* |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You do like to dandle words upon your knee...make 'em giggle and cry at the same time.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this! I'm pleased your sister joined us as well. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Awesome and of course i'll be looking out for your sister's work as well |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"is the feel sensible to touch or to constriction?.." ...evidently...both...or, is it all the same?... Thanks for taxing my brain... ~K~ |
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