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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-07 02:52 PM


the face is gray.
evidently,
emotions are suffocated.

paradox  is when everything is fled
to seek a thread

evidently… from transience to
extension is never obsolete
nor is pathology

any treatment  is harmless an useless.

wine darker than blood,
yet both resonance in red
splashed on deterioration

is the feel sensible to touch
or to constriction?..    


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pandonov
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1 posted 2003-11-07 02:55 PM


finally i brided my sister ( darkatnoon) to join the PiP. she was shy to such raw exposure of poetry, yet i calm her; not too many people would read her stuff anyway
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-11-07 02:56 PM


pandonov
It all depends on the wine. Enjoyed

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-11-07 03:00 PM


This is one of those that change color in differing lights, clever work as evidenced by your title..evidently. Grin?

Would love to know the inspiration of this one.

(and oh. Tell your sis I said not to sweat it--I used to worry over every word until someone informed ME not to worry-- "no one understands a thing you write anyway" )

and

pandonov
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4 posted 2003-11-07 03:13 PM


ha ha , thx Serenity
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5 posted 2003-11-07 03:25 PM


I'm glad your sister joined... I now look for your work... don't always comment, but I read. *S*
pandonov
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6 posted 2003-11-07 03:39 PM


thx
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7 posted 2003-11-09 09:21 PM


You do like to dandle words upon your knee...make 'em giggle and cry at the same time....

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Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-11-09 09:24 PM


Enjoyed this!
I'm pleased your sister joined us as well.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-11-09 09:37 PM


Awesome and of course i'll be looking out for your sister's work as well
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10 posted 2003-11-10 12:18 PM


"is the feel sensible to touch
or to constriction?.."

...evidently...both...or, is it all the same?...

Thanks for taxing my brain... ~K~    

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