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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Our last day found me standing in two worlds One foot in the past the other there with you Both hesitant to step into the future The one that takes my hands from your hips And your breath from my neck... I love you "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
The one that takes my hands from your hips And your breath from my neck... I love you reveals your deep love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx As light a touch as I've ever read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite. May your love for one another continue to grow. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
The house feels empty since I stood and watched you hand against the glass heart upon the pane as my own heart stretched as a rubberband would as the car drove . . . away . . . I sit here now and the smell of US is all around me I want to bottle and savor it like a fine wine Uncorked and poured breathing just enough until it is time to sip a bit I smell US within my clothes on my hands and in this air I breathe I know that will never leave me, this scent I want to capture it within my palm and hide it from the world yet as the steam rises I revel within our love, my soul which I have just given to you, and you in return to me and I hesitate for awhile reveling in this beauty of US this scent is all I have as the water awaits . . . I love you too Eddie xxoo |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ed i am just loving this it is like glitter in the air to me ...please keep it up...i am so enjoying it...how beautiful you and suz look in love...h |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 *sniff* so beautiful.."if you won't let me fall for you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yep, sniffing here but with a  you two are poetry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....I'm adding another sniff...this is so tenderly touching and heart wrenching at the same time. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wranx~ How gentle ... how very tender and gentle~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gah, this is sad  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dang! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a tender heart expression from both of you... ... remembering... *S* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
The gift you give to one another....is both beautiful and priceless.... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Isn't love precious? You want to share the excitement and joy you feel with others, but you also want to keep it really close to you...so that you can protect it and keep it forever.... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
felt as a man feels, told as a man tells.... excellent, Ed. Ed ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Isn't the leaving hard? But, you're still together, even when apart. Right, LittleOne and Ed? Hugs to you two  Ethel |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
God this is just so beautiful. to you both. Maree  fate is not just |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Too much for me,being my brother and all. How do you spell oooouuuuwww? Susie, beautiful come back, but I can do without the smell. Just a little humor only I can get away with. Love you both. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just smiling...at both of you. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
ya well, pardon me while I expire the entire box of Kleenex...dang. I'm happy that the two of you found exactly what you are looking for...and more. XOXO Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May this be a never-ending true love--true life--story...  |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
wranx, nothing fancy about this one, and your still able to touch the spot. Nice write. poe If nothing is something |
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