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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-11-04 01:09 AM




Frayed....
the fabric of my heart
strings of emotion
unbound
I collect them
gather them into
soft circles,
of remember
to one day
quilt them anew
and cover my soul
with the memories
....of you.....


~SEA~

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1 posted 2003-11-04 02:04 AM


a good reason to take up quilting, Lady.


Beautiful writing you have here. I wish I were around more often, and I hope you have been well.

Loving this...

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-04 02:06 AM


wonderfully done
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-11-04 09:40 AM


"quilt them anew
and cover my soul
with the memories
....of you....."

Yes! Wonderful!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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4 posted 2003-11-04 09:41 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

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5 posted 2003-11-04 10:29 AM


Gawd I love the way you write!!
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2003-11-04 11:34 AM


In the sadness of this one, there is something so lovely...Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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7 posted 2003-11-04 11:39 AM


SEA~
Sooooooooooooooooo lovely~
I feel the comforting of the quilting~
Hope it covers you in time of need~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

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8 posted 2003-11-04 03:03 PM


I like this very much... and it reminds me I've got quilt pieces cut and waiting. *S*
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9 posted 2003-11-04 03:24 PM



You probably know
where this is going...

Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-11-04 04:08 PM




(smiles) Oh Susan, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy you're back as your words are a blanket to all our hearts! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Aimster
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11 posted 2003-11-04 09:08 PM


susan,

damn this one had a raw ache to
it...felt this one indeed. you
are amazing my friend. we'll talk
soon!

love ya,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

allamericanjoe
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12 posted 2003-11-05 12:07 PM


That's just beautiful, I've not seen your writing before, but I'll watch for it now!  Great read.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

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