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Call of Tears
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Call of Tears |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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Breathing always makes me think More then I should, For every breath brings pain And oh the sorrows I reclaim. I cannot understand nor fathom all the things… The aching it just tears my soul apart, Compensating for my mind and heart… The fragile, helpless, Ever-falling, Hurting, dying, seeking, Call of tears. (this is unorganized, I know.. I wrote it in about ten seconds and my mood isn't to make anything perfect right now. Life is messed up, so this is too...) - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
actually it's perfectly organized, a fee write ..enjoyed and understood |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how it is...one day though, it will end...one day |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I think it is perfect! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
thanks guys  ... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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