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Open Poetry #29

November Falling

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-11-03 02:46 PM

leaves tapping,
a touch on falling,
a small noise mixed with the breeze
that rattles the holder-ons
sends others spinning
into piles

Gloom

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-11-03 03:03 PM

Hey Gloomy!

I always love it when you post..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-11-03 03:50 PM

Leaf-like castanets
Dance on the wind dying down
Puddled skirt below

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-03 03:59 PM

Oh my!! I love this!
YES!!!
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-11-03 07:00 PM

nicely done...I watched the leaves fall and dance all day...still one tree will not give them up yet.

Even that favorite one that is dying

is still hanging on... those branches closest to my window...

M

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2003-11-03 07:05 PM

beautiful, I do love Fall the best

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

6 posted 2003-11-04 07:47 PM

Color leaves falling,
Sunset in sky painting trees
In morning they lay

Poem wrote not Haiku, but very much like one. Lady Sunshine show how to respond, I write haiku, I like as she did.

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