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Open Poetry #29

Life quote

greco
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

0 posted 2003-11-02 05:34 PM

Life Without Dreams
Is Like Not living a Life at all

still working on the second line but thats all i got for now any suggestions let me know thanks

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-11-02 05:40 PM

Oh, yes that's true. I am a dreamer and if men had no dreams they would not walk ahead to realize them.
Beautiful life quote.
Love, Margherita

Mary Ann
Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

2 posted 2003-11-03 07:08 AM

Agree

I think what you have so far is great and I'm looking forward to reading the completed poem.....

God bless,

~MA~

greco
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

3 posted 2003-11-03 05:49 PM

How about instead of

Life Without Dreams
Is Like Not living a Life at all

Life Without Dreams
Is like death but barely

whcih one is better the first or second one

greco
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

4 posted 2003-11-04 08:30 PM

ok i think this one is it

Life without dreams
Is not really living a life at all

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