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0 posted 2003-09-24 04:44 PM


                
Graphic By Littlewing__Sue

~~**~~
When we fell in love
our whole mindset changed
All of our thoughts from before
were suddenly rearranged

Before we thought of ouselves
of what  ~I~  desired to do
Now we think of each other
of pleasing and caring for  ~you~

It makes a difference in our lives
of the days and nights we live
Instead of wanting to receive all the time
now our greatest joy is to give

Making sure the other is happy
with all needs and desires taken care of
Definitely changing our outlook on life
we think first of our dear Love
~~**~~




[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-25-2003 12:31 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-24 04:47 PM



As it should be...in all cases...
and Sue?  This is a fantastic graphic
that you presented to Ethel...

it certainly makes the poem a

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2 posted 2003-09-24 04:58 PM


You go girl....(does Gary now about us though?)...LOL...just kidding Gary...she said I was better looking and everything, but said you made more money.....I understand....LOL
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3 posted 2003-09-24 04:58 PM


Thank you so much, Karilea. Isn't the
graphic beautiful? I love it.
And thanks for keeping it. I moved the
big "edit" writing that was on there now. LOL
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-09-24 05:02 PM


Beautiful write Ethel..
and a lovely graphic by Sue!
~Smiles, Hugs & Luv, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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5 posted 2003-09-24 05:02 PM


Mr. Toerag!!  
You are a nut. Do you know that? But, Gary's not worried about me......he knows how I feel about him. LOL


Seriously, I sure am glad that you're feeling better and getting back to your old self. We all miss you around here when you're not here....Gary does, too!!  
Hugs, my friend  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-09-24 05:11 PM


Thank you, Nancy. I'm so glad that you like it.
I know that Sue will be glad that you like the graphic, too.
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-09-24 05:28 PM


Ethel, what a beautiful write
(I cannot believe you used this
here *blushing* - there is another
one coming - better than this one)
but thank you - is so sweet and am
glad you liked it enough to use it


here:  the most important . . .

Instead of wanting to receive all the time
now our greatest joy is to give

You are so thoughtful Ethel
and once again, have put a smile
on my face - one for the write
the other for the graphic
*smile*
xxoo



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8 posted 2003-09-24 05:32 PM


this is beautifull and Sue's picture is wonderful

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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9 posted 2003-09-24 05:43 PM



This is beautiful...both the write and the graphic.

Hugging you both...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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10 posted 2003-09-24 05:47 PM


You know these are surely the right ingredients for happiness, and I wish you more than you can wish for yourself
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11 posted 2003-09-24 05:54 PM


Champions of Love, Ethel and Gary.
You are an example of how it should be!
Beautiful words and beautiful graphic.
Lovely gift.
Hugs and love, Margherita

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12 posted 2003-09-24 05:56 PM


Sue, I'm glad that you like the poem. And you know I love the graphic. I think I've figured out how to put them on here now. When you made the one with my name and the butterfly, I couldn' get it on here. I'm going to try that one now.  LOL

Oh, everybody likes your work, so don't blush. I've been wondering why you don't use some of your graphics on your poems. They are really good.

Hugs to you  
Ethel





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13 posted 2003-09-24 07:30 PM


nice read
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14 posted 2003-09-24 07:48 PM


Liz, thank you. I'm really glad that you like it.
.
Vicky, thank you so much. And hugs back to you.  
.
Thanks, Sharon. I really appreciate the good wishes, too.  
.
Margherita, thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it.  
.
.
I really do appreciate all of you.  
Hugs to each of you,  
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-09-24 07:49 PM


Thanks, Vandana. I'm glad that you like it.  
I appreciate you.
Hugs  
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-09-24 07:55 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, your gorgeous poem and Sue's gorgeous graphic is the perfect poetic heaven combination, sweet friend, yay! Sue, you are such a wonderful artist and made Ethel's poem here extra special, God Bless You, and God Bless You Ethel and may you keep giving and may Gary always make you feel gifted with happiness forever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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17 posted 2003-09-24 08:38 PM


Ethel, this is so beautiful.
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18 posted 2003-09-24 09:10 PM


Ethel...Love is a special gift..I see you take care of it well.. Lovely graphic from Sue.  Hugs to both of you.
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19 posted 2003-09-24 09:36 PM


This is very special and shows why you are the person that you are.Your words are happy and full of such tenderness that it touches the reader within.Sue's picture is wnoderful and accents your words mos vividly.
Crystal

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20 posted 2003-09-24 09:53 PM


Thanks, Noah. There you are, saying just
the right words again. You always know what to say.
.
Sue, I'm so glad that you like it.Thank you very much.  
.
Thank you, Martie. That's so sweet of you to say.
Hugs to you, too, sweet lady.  
.
Crystal, thank you. You are a very sweet
person. Your words are so nice.
.
.
I really appreciate all of you.
Hugs to each on of you.
Ethel

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21 posted 2003-09-24 10:17 PM


Wow! Beauty blessed by beauty!

*smiling at both of you*

Ed

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22 posted 2003-09-25 10:17 AM


Thanks, Ed. Your words are
very much appreciated.
Best wishes to you and Sue,
Hugs to both of you, too.....
Ethel

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23 posted 2003-10-30 08:13 AM


nicely done
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24 posted 2003-11-01 03:23 AM


oh my...In awe

I'm glad I didn't miss this one! just beautiful!

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25 posted 2003-11-01 03:44 AM


Aye... very beautiful, and well written, to be in love so deep must be truly amazing.
Enjoyed much...
Rob

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