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letters, syllables and self pitied drivel
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letters, syllables and self pitied drivel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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on nights as this the futility of words becomes most evident no combination of letters and syllables could justly convey the long for quivered lips of warm embrace her touch no written word or verse could ever impart the suffer of life without |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea, well just try to learn from it for next time when it comes round.........very cool and expressive rafi |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
no kidding . . . but a nice try nonetheless |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 tonight I've been slammed & this slams me even harder..if that makes sense...someone's got lead foot...uh huh yeah..If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Somehow you did manage to find the letters and syllables to convey your feelings... loving hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) However, you did manage to express much poignant points here, dearest friend, there may not be a particular word to describe the drivel but you so very well get to the heart of the matter! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so very sad, a sadness well-conveyed. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks all youre way too kind..personally this stinks on ice |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The yearning to touch is so perverse that it can even be met through words. *smile* |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
no written word or verse could ever impart the suffer of life without good words of wisdon,,,, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
god this aches |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes touching and not having is worse than not touching at all... But I know what you mean.. Susan |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
your writings I enjoy! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
No, no words cant relate to anyone what you are feeling inside, this I do know but I adore the title *smiling here* and uhhh this would taste pretty good on the rocks with a splash of Comfortably Numb *smile* xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-21-2003 01:12 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
No, they couldn't, but yes they have! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks again everyone for bearing this..urgh |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
as abuseive a friend I may be I hate to see you suffer. but suffering gives me stuff like this so I'm not gonna be nice. (you can count on it) lava u And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
too late you were already nice..hahaha got you! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I have known but not forgotten... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
why did that have to make perfect sense. You left me earlier, merely because you were scared i was gonna beat you.  going back to the bawling Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you smell funny  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
he does a bit. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 oh ya....into my library! hugs, ChrisLet your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
An ache so wonderfully expressed handsome  keeping it btw. M  fate is not just |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
He smells like.. pine, and mustard. Raph, great write.. it doesn't stink, you stink. hehehe.. Ok, ok, all kidding aside.. Library. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
no combination of letters and syllables could justly convey the long for quivered lips of warm embrace her touch and you are so right... |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
so great, everytime. and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Choked back the tears. Not an easy one to read.  Love, Shara~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
and within your letters and syllables, I always find honesty and wisdom... I thank you! Patricia |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
good...very good *jb applauds* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I miss your words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bumpdittybumpbump |
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