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DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
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Monticello IN

0 posted 2003-11-01 03:21 AM



I want to get into You
Because I like it there

I breath deeper
live deeper

Living Breathing
I am Where

Bind  me sole and Soul to the One
Together to pour Love into the world
until tears of joy fall like rain


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Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
Posts 142
MT, USA
1 posted 2003-11-01 04:04 AM


Enjoyed... but it could be a tad longer, i sensed some emotion, but i feel there could be more... Still, enjoyed.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-01 04:14 AM


very sensual
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